Friday, September 6, 2013
Bryson
When people hear my name
I hope they think of me
The name "Bryson" just does not describe me
It describes who I want to be.
When people hear my name
I hope they smile and cheer
My goals and dreams will take my name
Beyond my every fear
When people hear my name
I hope they know I am one of a kind
Theres not to many "Bryson's"
One will know and find
When people hear my name
I hope it is good intentioned
I raise my head up high
And seek my self-redemption
When people hear my name
And oh how I hope they do
I want myname to be heard
I want my name to be new
I want my name of Bryson
To be more than just a name
I want my name of Bryson
To go down into fame.
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Good job
ReplyDeleteI like that you said you seek your own self redemption
ReplyDeleteBryson, what do you want to be famous for?
ReplyDeleteFor someone who has really cheesy comments, this was a great poem!!!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the rhyming. It was a very good poem. :) I can see that you put effort into it.
ReplyDeleteI like how the poem was about how your name is unique and how you won't really find it anywhere else.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I like how realist it was how it not only ways what your name means to you but how you want it to be seen
ReplyDeleteI liked your repetition and how you said you want your name to go down in fame. Good poem
ReplyDeleteI liked the rhyme scheme! Very cool that you put what you want people to think of when they hear your name, very unique and cool.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you wanted your name basically to be well known, and you want to hear your name being called in a good way. I like your rhyming too ! (:
ReplyDeleteI liked how you ended your poem , like how you want to go down in fame . It was very well written . Good Job .
ReplyDeleteVery well written. Liked the rhyme scheme and how you said you wanted to go down into fame. (: good job.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about 'Bryson' rather then William. Also, I like how you talked about how you want people to think about you when they hear your name.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you want to be famous for? Basketball? Nice poem (:
ReplyDeleteI liked your "poem". You should've took the time to put it in original poem format. But great job !!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming was great, and I liked how you talked about wanting people to recognize your name and for it to be famous. It was a great poem
ReplyDeleteLol
ReplyDeleteLol.
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DeleteI like how u said I keep my head held high
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